What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Per FAA order 8020.11B paragraph 265: name of jumper: privacy data omitted. Experience and training of jumper: unknown at this time, will update information when available. Club affiliation: freefall express skydiving, inc. description of the parachutes and their packing records: main parachute: performance designs model spectre 170, serial no: SP170-002264. No packing record; parachutist may pack their own parachute. Reserve parachute: performance designs pd reserve model 193, serial no: 14525. Packed by privacy data omitted on 10/10/2008. privacy data omitted Jumped from aircraft at 10,000 feet. At about 3,500 feet, he deployed his main parachute and for some unknown reason then cut the main parachue away. At about 2,000 feet, he deployed his reserve parachute, which did not fully open before impacting the ground. Incident number privacy data omitted is closed with this report.
As the FAA filed it
PER FAA ORDER 8020.11B PARAGRAPH 265: NAME OF JUMPER: ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^. EXPERIENCE AND TRAINING OF JUMPER: UNKNOWN AT THIS TIME, WILL UPDATE INFORMATION WHEN AVAILABLE. CLUB AFFILIATION: FREEFALL EXPRESS SKYDIVING, INC. DESCRIPTION OF THE PARACHUTES AND THEIR PACKING RECORDS: MAIN PARACHUTE: PERFORMANCE DESIGNS MODEL SPECTRE 170, SERIAL NO: SP170-002264. NO PACKING RECORD; PARACHUTIST MAY PACK THEIR OWN PARACHUTE. RESERVE PARACHUTE: PERFORMANCE DESIGNS PD RESERVE MODEL 193, SERIAL NO: 14525. PACKED BY ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ ON 10/10/2008. ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ JUMPED FROM AIRCRAFT AT 10,000 FEET. AT ABOUT 3,500 FEET, HE DEPLOYED HIS MAIN PARACHUTE AND FOR SOME UNKNOWN REASON THEN CUT THE MAIN PARACHUE AWAY. AT ABOUT 2,000 FEET, HE DEPLOYED HIS RESERVE PARACHUTE, WHICH DID NOT FULLY OPEN BEFORE IMPACTING THE GROUND. INCIDENT NUMBER ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ IS CLOSED WITH THIS REPORT.