What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On December 26, 2008 at approximately 1730 EDT, at sky dive city located in Zephyrhills, FL two persons participating a parachute jump collided in mid air, causing the death of one parachutist and injuring the other parachutist. Information on injured parachutist: privacy data omitted, current d license from united states parachute association with approximately thirty years of skydiving experience and well over one thousand jumps. Club affiliation is with united states parachute associate. Parachute was a saber two with a reserve pack date of September 04, 2008. Information on deceased parachutist: privacy data omitted, current d license from united states parachute associate with approximately 10 years of skydiving experience and well over nine hundred jumps. Club affiliation is with united states parachute associate. Parachute was a diablo with a reserve pack date of October 17, 2008.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON DECEMBER 26, 2008 AT APPROXIMATELY 1730 EDT, AT SKY DIVE CITY LOCATED IN ZEPHYRHILLS, FL TWO PERSONS PARTICIPATING A PARACHUTE JUMP COLLIDED IN MID AIR, CAUSING THE DEATH OF ONE PARACHUTIST AND INJURING THE OTHER PARACHUTIST. INFORMATION ON INJURED PARACHUTIST: ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^, CURRENT D LICENSE FROM UNITED STATES PARACHUTE ASSOCIATION WITH APPROXIMATELY THIRTY YEARS OF SKYDIVING EXPERIENCE AND WELL OVER ONE THOUSAND JUMPS. CLUB AFFILIATION IS WITH UNITED STATES PARACHUTE ASSOCIATE. PARACHUTE WAS A SABER TWO WITH A RESERVE PACK DATE OF SEPTEMBER 04, 2008. INFORMATION ON DECEASED PARACHUTIST: ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^, CURRENT D LICENSE FROM UNITED STATES PARACHUTE ASSOCIATE WITH APPROXIMATELY 10 YEARS OF SKYDIVING EXPERIENCE AND WELL OVER NINE HUNDRED JUMPS. CLUB AFFILIATION IS WITH UNITED STATES PARACHUTE ASSOCIATE. PARACHUTE WAS A DIABLO WITH A RESERVE PACK DATE OF OCTOBER 17, 2008.