What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
During the great Reno Balloon races in Reno, Nevada, the pilot departed san rafael park on a media flight. After flying for approximately 30 minutes, the pilot began a landing approach. The wind shifted and a missed approach was initiated. The pilot attempted several other landings; however, continued to encounter shifting winds. The pilot stated that he found an oppertunity to land and successfully landed the Balloon. After landing, the Balloon rolled into a dead tree damaging 13 panels.
As the FAA filed it
DURING THE GREAT RENO BALLOON RACES IN RENO, NEVADA, THE PILOT DEPARTED SAN RAFAEL PARK ON A MEDIA FLIGHT. AFTER FLYING FOR APPROXIMATELY 30 MINUTES, THE PILOT BEGAN A LANDING APPROACH. THE WIND SHIFTED AND A MISSED APPROACH WAS INITIATED. THE PILOT ATTEMPTED SEVERAL OTHER LANDINGS; HOWEVER, CONTINUED TO ENCOUNTER SHIFTING WINDS. THE PILOT STATED THAT HE FOUND AN OPPERTUNITY TO LAND AND SUCCESSFULLY LANDED THE BALLOON. AFTER LANDING, THE BALLOON ROLLED INTO A DEAD TREE DAMAGING 13 PANELS.