What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
On may 21, 2011 at 730 mt, a Balloon Works, firefly 7-B, N1524V, registered to the owner, was landing about 2 miles north of red rock state park, NM. After touch down the envelope draped over a power line causing minor damage to the envelope. Visual meteorological conditions prevailed at the time. The commercial rated pilot and passenger were uninjured. The flight originated at red rock state park, NM, on may 21, 2011 at approximately 700 mt.
As the FAA filed it
ON MAY 21, 2011 AT 730 MT, A BALLOON WORKS, FIREFLY 7-B, N1524V, REGISTERED TO THE OWNER, WAS LANDING ABOUT 2 MILES NORTH OF RED ROCK STATE PARK, NM. AFTER TOUCH DOWN THE ENVELOPE DRAPED OVER A POWER LINE CAUSING MINOR DAMAGE TO THE ENVELOPE. VISUAL METEOROLOGICAL CONDITIONS PREVAILED AT THE TIME. THE COMMERCIAL RATED PILOT AND PASSENGER WERE UNINJURED. THE FLIGHT ORIGINATED AT RED ROCK STATE PARK, NM, ON MAY 21, 2011 AT APPROXIMATELY 700 MT.