What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
On July 20, 2011 at Santa Monica Airport (ksmo) a pilot and flight instructor were conducting a flight review in N91DR, a dave Ronneberg b.e.d aircraft. A complete pre-flight and run-up was conducted by the pilot with satisfactory results the pilot accelerated down runway 21 with normal engine indications. After rotation and an initial climb to approximately two hundred feet, the pilot felt the aircraft engine begin to stutter. At approximately six hundred feet, the stutter was continuous and engine power was deteriorating. The pilot contacted the control tower informing them that he was returning to the airport. The pilot started a shallow left descending turn for runway 3 at ksmo. The pilot crossed the runway at mid field landing hard on the north taxiway collapsing both main landing gear. The pilot and flight instructor were uninjured.
As the FAA filed it
ON JULY 20, 2011 AT SANTA MONICA AIRPORT (KSMO) A PILOT AND FLIGHT INSTRUCTOR WERE CONDUCTING A FLIGHT REVIEW IN N91DR, A DAVE RONNEBERG B.E.D AIRCRAFT. A COMPLETE PRE-FLIGHT AND RUN-UP WAS CONDUCTED BY THE PILOT WITH SATISFACTORY RESULTS THE PILOT ACCELERATED DOWN RUNWAY 21 WITH NORMAL ENGINE INDICATIONS. AFTER ROTATION AND AN INITIAL CLIMB TO APPROXIMATELY TWO HUNDRED FEET, THE PILOT FELT THE AIRCRAFT ENGINE BEGIN TO STUTTER. AT APPROXIMATELY SIX HUNDRED FEET, THE STUTTER WAS CONTINUOUS AND ENGINE POWER WAS DETERIORATING. THE PILOT CONTACTED THE CONTROL TOWER INFORMING THEM THAT HE WAS RETURNING TO THE AIRPORT. THE PILOT STARTED A SHALLOW LEFT DESCENDING TURN FOR RUNWAY 3 AT KSMO. THE PILOT CROSSED THE RUNWAY AT MID FIELD LANDING HARD ON THE NORTH TAXIWAY COLLAPSING BOTH MAIN LANDING GEAR. THE PILOT AND FLIGHT INSTRUCTOR WERE UNINJURED.