What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
On October 23, 2011, at approximately 1330 local, 1730 zulu, Wright/Velocity aircraft Velocity Xl-Rg, N65VT, s/n 3RX111 was landing in Rockhill, SC, at uza on runway 20. The pilot stated on touchdown nose wheel begin to shimmythen and the nose of the aircraft dropped impacting the runway coming to a stop. Inspection of the nose landing gear found that the nose landing gear strut tube failed / broke off. The aircraft manufacture redesigned the nose landing gear to incorporate a shimmy damper; the owner has ordered the new landing gear assy.
As the FAA filed it
ON OCTOBER 23, 2011, AT APPROXIMATELY 1330 LOCAL, 1730 ZULU, WRIGHT/VELOCITY AIRCRAFT VELOCITY XL-RG, N65VT, S/N 3RX111 WAS LANDING IN ROCKHILL, SC, AT UZA ON RUNWAY 20. THE PILOT STATED ON TOUCHDOWN NOSE WHEEL BEGIN TO SHIMMYTHEN AND THE NOSE OF THE AIRCRAFT DROPPED IMPACTING THE RUNWAY COMING TO A STOP.INSPECTION OF THE NOSE LANDING GEAR FOUND THAT THE NOSE LANDING GEAR STRUT TUBE FAILED / BROKE OFF.THE AIRCRAFT MANUFACTURE REDESIGNED THE NOSE LANDING GEAR TO INCORPORATE A SHIMMY DAMPER; THE OWNER HAS ORDERED THE NEW LANDING GEAR ASSY.