What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Fatalty due to impact with ground. Witnesses reported jumper appeared normal during freefall and was able to deploy his parachute. Witness video shows parachutist incapacitated under a fast spinning main parachute up into impact with ground. Jumper name: william lowndes calhoun iii. Experience & training: holder of uspa master rating license # D-19615.1650 total jumps on record with uspa. Club affiliation /drop zone affiliation: Lodi parachute center. Parachute system: main canopy: performance design, spectre 170, p/n SP0170P04.harness /container: fliteline systems inc., reflex p/n RA01-1( ).reserve canopy: precision aerodynamics, inc., microraven 150-M, S/N54733133,
As the FAA filed it
FATALTY DUE TO IMPACT WITH GROUND.WITNESSES REPORTED JUMPER APPEARED NORMAL DURING FREEFALL AND WAS ABLE TO DEPLOY HIS PARACHUTE.WITNESS VIDEO SHOWS PARACHUTIST INCAPACITATED UNDER A FAST SPINNING MAIN PARACHUTE UP INTO IMPACT WITH GROUND. JUMPER NAME: WILLIAM LOWNDES CALHOUN III.EXPERIENCE & TRAINING: HOLDER OF USPA MASTER RATING LICENSE # D-19615.1650 TOTAL JUMPS ON RECORD WITH USPA. CLUB AFFILIATION /DROP ZONE AFFILIATION: LODI PARACHUTE CENTER.PARACHUTE SYSTEM: MAIN CANOPY: PERFORMANCE DESIGN, SPECTRE 170, P/N SP0170P04.HARNESS /CONTAINER: FLITELINE SYSTEMS INC., REFLEX P/N RA01-1( ).RESERVE CANOPY: PRECISION AERODYNAMICS, INC., MICRORAVEN 150-M, S/N54733133,