What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Nine jumpers exited the aircraft at 5,000 feet. At 500 to 700 feet two jumpers collided. The first jumper's main parachute was damaged and deflated. The jumper cut the main parachute away and deployed the reserve parachute. The jumper struct the ground before the reserve parachute inflated. The second jumper had slight damage to his parachute but landed safely.
As the FAA filed it
NINE JUMPERS EXITED THE AIRCRAFT AT 5,000 FEET. AT 500 TO 700 FEET TWO JUMPERS COLLIDED. THE FIRST JUMPER'S MAIN PARACHUTE WAS DAMAGED AND DEFLATED. THE JUMPER CUT THE MAIN PARACHUTE AWAY AND DEPLOYED THE RESERVE PARACHUTE. THE JUMPER STRUCT THE GROUND BEFORE THE RESERVE PARACHUTE INFLATED. THE SECOND JUMPER HAD SLIGHT DAMAGE TO HIS PARACHUTE BUT LANDED SAFELY.