What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
On August 17,2015 at 1624 hours detective sergent privacy data omitted of the rutland, Vermont state police was notified of a parachutist in West Addison,Vermont making a hard landing.
The parachutist, privacy data omitted had 49 years skydiving experience. His most recent jumps were associated with skydiving adventures West Addison, Vermont. His parachute was manufactured in July of 2012 by hurricane. Model 120, p/n, hurricane 120-9.the reserve parachute a paraflit model swiftplus, was packed on 04/14/2015 by privacy data omitted, place: vsa VT, certificate # privacy data omitted vms.
As the FAA filed it
ON AUGUST 17,2015 AT 1624 HOURS DETECTIVE SERGENT ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ OF THE RUTLAND, VERMONT STATE POLICE WAS NOTIFIED OF A PARACHUTIST IN WEST ADDISON,VERMONT MAKING A HARD LANDING.
THE PARACHUTIST, ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ HAD 49 YEARS SKYDIVING EXPERIENCE. HIS MOST RECENT JUMPS WERE ASSOCIATED WITH SKYDIVING ADVENTURES WEST ADDISON, VERMONT. HIS PARACHUTE WAS MANUFACTURED IN JULY OF 2012 BY HURRICANE. MODEL 120, P/N, HURRICANE 120-9.THE RESERVE PARACHUTE A PARAFLIT MODEL SWIFTPLUS, WAS PACKED ON 04/14/2015 BY ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^, PLACE: VSA VT, CERTIFICATE # ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ VMS.