What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
On October 2, 2016, at 0839 MDT, an aero star international inc. balloon bearing registration number N64914, collided with a power line in Albuquerque, NM. The balloon was being operated on a personal flight. Visual metrological conditions prevailed at the time, and no flight plan was filed. The commercial balloon pilot and the two passengers were not injured. The flight originated from Albuquerque balloon fiesta part on October 2, 2016, at approximately 0800 MDT.
As the FAA filed it
ON OCTOBER 2, 2016, AT 0839 MDT, AN AERO STAR INTERNATIONAL INC. BALLOON BEARING REGISTRATION NUMBER N64914, COLLIDED WITH A POWER LINE IN ALBUQUERQUE, NM. THE BALLOON WAS BEING OPERATED ON A PERSONAL FLIGHT. VISUAL METROLOGICAL CONDITIONS PREVAILED AT THE TIME, AND NO FLIGHT PLAN WAS FILED. THE COMMERCIAL BALLOON PILOT AND THE TWO PASSENGERS WERE NOT INJURED. THE FLIGHT ORIGINATED FROM ALBUQUERQUE BALLOON FIESTA PART ON OCTOBER 2, 2016, AT APPROXIMATELY 0800 MDT.