What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
At top of descent into hnl airport, the captain and first officer noticed smoke entering the cockpit and donned O2 masks. Ecams followed seconds later: fwd cargo smoke, aft cargo smoke, avionics smoke, and a momentary chip detector indication. An emergency was declared followed by an emergency evacuation of all passengers and crew via slides upon landing at hnl.
As the FAA filed it
AT TOP OF DESCENT INTO HNL AIRPORT, THE CAPTAIN AND FIRST OFFICER NOTICED SMOKE ENTERING THE COCKPIT AND DONNED O2 MASKS. ECAMS FOLLOWED SECONDS LATER: FWD CARGO SMOKE, AFT CARGO SMOKE, AVIONICS SMOKE, AND A MOMENTARY CHIP DETECTOR INDICATION. AN EMERGENCY WAS DECLARED FOLLOWED BY AN EMERGENCY EVACUATION OF ALL PASSENGERS AND CREW VIA SLIDES UPON LANDING AT HNL.