What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Group of 12 exited aircraft and performed multiple formations before deploying parachutes. Fatality occurred in landing zone when the jumper experienced a very hard landing resulting in multiple injuries. Witness statements approximate a fall of 30-50 feet when canopy "dove" to the ground and victim did not flare the chute. Incident was not caught on video.
As the FAA filed it
GROUP OF 12 EXITED AIRCRAFT AND PERFORMED MULTIPLE FORMATIONS BEFORE DEPLOYING PARACHUTES. FATALITY OCCURRED IN LANDING ZONE WHEN THE JUMPER EXPERIENCED A VERY HARD LANDING RESULTING IN MULTIPLE INJURIES. WITNESS STATEMENTS APPROXIMATE A FALL OF 30-50 FEET WHEN CANOPY "DOVE" TO THE GROUND AND VICTIM DID NOT FLARE THE CHUTE. INCIDENT WAS NOT CAUGHT ON VIDEO.