What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
This was the jumper's fifth jump of the day. First solo jump, after four tandems earlier in the day. Eyewitness reports that jumper executed a high-performance hook turn at approximately 300 to 400 feet above ground level. The jumper realized he was too low and immediately attempted to slow his descent and speed, but was unable to make corrections on time, and struck the ground.
As the FAA filed it
THIS WAS THE JUMPER'S FIFTH JUMP OF THE DAY. FIRST SOLO JUMP, AFTER FOUR TANDEMS EARLIER IN THE DAY. EYEWITNESS REPORTS THAT JUMPER EXECUTED A HIGH-PERFORMANCE HOOK TURN AT APPROXIMATELY 300 TO 400 FEET ABOVE GROUND LEVEL. THE JUMPER REALIZED HE WAS TOO LOW AND IMMEDIATELY ATTEMPTED TO SLOW HIS DESCENT AND SPEED, BUT WAS UNABLE TO MAKE CORRECTIONS ON TIME, AND STRUCK THE GROUND.