What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Ord-yul, in cruise at FL330, crew noticed RH windshield cracked with internal arcing. A diversion to yyz was initiated and the landing was uneventful. An emergency landing was not declared. Maintenance completed a replacement of the RH windshield, and the aircraft was returned to service.
As the FAA filed it
ORD-YUL, IN CRUISE AT FL330, CREW NOTICED RH WINDSHIELD CRACKED WITH INTERNAL ARCING. A DIVERSION TO YYZ WAS INITIATED AND THE LANDING WAS UNEVENTFUL. AN EMERGENCY LANDING WAS NOT DECLARED. MAINTENANCE COMPLETED A REPLACEMENT OF THE RH WINDSHIELD, AND THE AIRCRAFT WAS RETURNED TO SERVICE.