What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on January 19, 1994 at approximately 0940 EST, a Boeing 727 aircraft owned by federal express corporation and operating as fedex 971, landed at the Rochester, NY airport. As the aircraft taxied in, the aft airstair door dropped open. Company maintenance personnel rendered the door inop in the closed position and deferred under MEL 52-3. Aircraft returned to service. Repairs to be accomplished at memphis. Visual meteorological conditions prevailed and an IFR flight plan had been filed. The aircraft was not damaged and no person was injured. This incident is considered closed.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON JANUARY 19, 1994 AT APPROXIMATELY 0940 EST, A BOEING 727 AIRCRAFT OWNED BY FEDERAL EXPRESS CORPORATION AND OPERATING AS FEDEX 971, LANDED AT THE ROCHESTER, NY AIRPORT. AS THE AIRCRAFT TAXIED IN, THE AFT AIRSTAIR DOOR DROPPED OPEN. COMPANY MAINTENANCE PERSONNEL RENDERED THE DOOR INOP IN THE CLOSED POSITION AND DEFERRED UNDER MEL 52-3. AIRCRAFT RETURNED TO SERVICE. REPAIRS TO BE ACCOMPLISHED AT MEMPHIS. VISUAL METEOROLOGICAL CONDITIONS PREVAILED AND AN IFR FLIGHT PLAN HAD BEEN FILED. THE AIRCRAFT WAS NOT DAMAGED AND NO PERSON WAS INJURED. THIS INCIDENT IS CONSIDERED CLOSED.