What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on 30 July 1994 at 1815 local CST, subject skydiver exited aircraft N9NK, a Beech 65-80, at 13,000' AGL with seven other skydivers. While forming up at 3500' AGL, subject's parachute had left brake come unstowed causing spiral to right; after one turn, with subject under canopy, she collided with another skydiver, knocking her helmet off and rendering her unconscious. She continued downward in spiral with canopy open. Fellow skydiver reported she appeared to be unconscious the entire descent. Subject impacted a steel gate in a driveway. She was taken to hospital with multiple injuries and died 4 August 1994 at 2155, having never regained consciousness. Operator of the skydive facility reported that incident could possibly have been prevented if subject had taken more care with repacking parachute. Training: all training had been received at skydive america in Beaumont since March 1994. Experience: subject had 50 freefall jumps, the total of her experience. Equipment: main canopy glide path cricket; reserve national phantom 22' reserve was packed 07-14-94.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON 30 JULY 1994 AT 1815 LOCAL CST, SUBJECT SKYDIVER EXITED AIRCRAFT N9NK, A BEECH 65-80, AT 13,000' AGL WITH SEVEN OTHER SKYDIVERS. WHILE FORMING UP AT 3500' AGL, SUBJECT'S PARACHUTE HAD LEFT BRAKE COME UNSTOWED CAUSING SPIRAL TO RIGHT; AFTER ONE TURN, WITH SUBJECT UNDER CANOPY, SHE COLLIDED WITH ANOTHER SKYDIVER, KNOCKING HER HELMET OFF AND RENDERING HER UNCONSCIOUS. SHE CONTINUED DOWNWARD IN SPIRAL WITH CANOPY OPEN. FELLOW SKYDIVER REPORTED SHE APPEARED TO BE UNCONSCIOUS THE ENTIRE DESCENT. SUBJECT IMPACTED A STEEL GATE IN A DRIVEWAY. SHE WAS TAKEN TO HOSPITAL WITH MULTIPLE INJURIES AND DIED 4 AUGUST 1994 AT 2155, HAVING NEVER REGAINED CONSCIOUSNESS. OPERATOR OF THE SKYDIVE FACILITY REPORTED THAT INCIDENT COULD POSSIBLY HAVE BEEN PREVENTED IF SUBJECT HAD TAKEN MORE CARE WITH REPACKING PARACHUTE. TRAINING: ALL TRAINING HAD BEEN RECEIVED AT SKYDIVE AMERICA IN BEAUMONT SINCE MARCH 1994. EXPERIENCE: SUBJECT HAD 50 FREEFALL JUMPS, THE TOTAL OF HER EXPERIENCE. EQUIPMENT: MAIN CANOPY GLIDE PATH CRICKET; RESERVE NATIONAL PHANTOM 22' RESERVE WAS PACKED 07-14-94.