What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: southwest flight 1693 experienced an aircraft tail scrape on lift off at sna and was observed by tower personnel. The flight was advised by the tower and acknowledged by the crew. Flight 1693 proceeded to destination (slc). Appropriate maintenance was accomplished on the aircraft at slc. During separate telecons with the swaa poi and the swaa assistant chief pilot, it was learned that the crew was relieved from duty on the same day, given time off, then remedial training took place. Crew is back on the line as of this report date. Confirmed air carrier remedy, no further action desired, matter closed.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: SOUTHWEST FLIGHT 1693 EXPERIENCED AN AIRCRAFT TAIL SCRAPE ON LIFT OFF AT SNA AND WAS OBSERVED BY TOWER PERSONNEL. THE FLIGHT WAS ADVISED BY THE TOWER AND ACKNOWLEDGED BY THE CREW. FLIGHT 1693 PROCEEDED TO DESTINATION (SLC). APPROPRIATE MAINTENANCE WAS ACCOMPLISHED ON THE AIRCRAFT AT SLC. DURING SEPARATE TELECONS WITH THE SWAA POI AND THE SWAA ASSISTANT CHIEF PILOT, IT WAS LEARNED THAT THE CREW WAS RELIEVED FROM DUTY ON THE SAME DAY, GIVEN TIME OFF, THEN REMEDIAL TRAINING TOOK PLACE. CREW IS BACK ON THE LINE AS OF THIS REPORT DATE. CONFIRMED AIR CARRIER REMEDY, NO FURTHER ACTION DESIRED, MATTER CLOSED.