What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: pilot-in-command failed to remove nose gear tow bar before flight with three (3) passengers on board. Flight was under FAR 135. Upon raising the gear, damage occurred to the nose gear. PIC diverted to bjc and landed after extending the gear. Nose wheel collapsed after touchdown, tow bar was still attached. Evaluation by local mechanics determined no "substantial damage".
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: PILOT-IN-COMMAND FAILED TO REMOVE NOSE GEAR TOW BAR BEFORE FLIGHT WITH THREE (3) PASSENGERS ON BOARD. FLIGHT WAS UNDER FAR 135. UPON RAISING THE GEAR, DAMAGE OCCURRED TO THE NOSE GEAR. PIC DIVERTED TO BJC AND LANDED AFTER EXTENDING THE GEAR. NOSE WHEEL COLLAPSED AFTER TOUCHDOWN, TOW BAR WAS STILL ATTACHED. EVALUATION BY LOCAL MECHANICS DETERMINED NO "SUBSTANTIAL DAMAGE".