What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: while en-route from lga to mia, crew observed an excessive rise on the oil pressure gauge through all phases of flight, the indicator continued to rise into the precautionary range with a correspondent drop of one (1) gallon of oil quantity. Crew selected to accomplish precautionary engine shutdown. Crew reported that as throttle for #3 engine was retarded to idle oil temperature exceeded 160 degrees. Crew elected to divert flight to Raleigh-Durham airport, for maintenance. Aircraft landed and taxied to parking at rdu without further incident. Maintenance inspected #3 engine, engine removal and replacement in process.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: WHILE EN-ROUTE FROM LGA TO MIA, CREW OBSERVED AN EXCESSIVE RISE ON THE OIL PRESSURE GAUGE THROUGH ALL PHASES OF FLIGHT, THE INDICATOR CONTINUED TO RISE INTO THE PRECAUTIONARY RANGE WITH A CORRESPONDENT DROP OF ONE (1) GALLON OF OIL QUANTITY. CREW SELECTED TO ACCOMPLISH PRECAUTIONARY ENGINE SHUTDOWN. CREW REPORTED THAT AS THROTTLE FOR #3 ENGINE WAS RETARDED TO IDLE OIL TEMPERATURE EXCEEDED 160 DEGREES. CREW ELECTED TO DIVERT FLIGHT TO RALEIGH-DURHAM AIRPORT, FOR MAINTENANCE. AIRCRAFT LANDED AND TAXIED TO PARKING AT RDU WITHOUT FURTHER INCIDENT. MAINTENANCE INSPECTED #3 ENGINE, ENGINE REMOVAL AND REPLACEMENT IN PROCESS.