What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on jan. 6, 1996, Mr. Jim sprinkle was fatally wounded when he was making a parachute jump. Witnesses stated that Mr. Sprinkle was attempting a hard turn at approximately 300 ft. AGL. Causing his chute to stall. At approximately 150 ft. AGL, he cut free of his main parachute and deployed his reserve. The reserve did not have enough altitude to fully deploy. Mr. Sprinkle had over 3000 jumps and was a parachute instructor. The parachute logs were properly documented.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON JAN. 6, 1996, MR. JIM SPRINKLE WAS FATALLY WOUNDED WHEN HE WAS MAKING A PARACHUTE JUMP. WITNESSES STATED THAT MR. SPRINKLE WAS ATTEMPTING A HARD TURN AT APPROXIMATELY 300 FT. AGL. CAUSING HIS CHUTE TO STALL. AT APPROXIMATELY 150 FT. AGL, HE CUT FREE OF HIS MAIN PARACHUTE AND DEPLOYED HIS RESERVE. THE RESERVE DID NOT HAVE ENOUGH ALTITUDE TO FULLY DEPLOY. MR. SPRINKLE HAD OVER 3000 JUMPS AND WAS A PARACHUTE INSTRUCTOR. THE PARACHUTE LOGS WERE PROPERLY DOCUMENTED.