What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on April 19, 1996, aircraft N3244NW, northwest flight #358, from san francisco, CA enroute to minneapolis/st. paul, MN diverted to Salt Lake City International Airport, UT due to a no. 2 engine flame-out. The pilot declared an emergency and made an uneventful landing at Salt Lake City International Airport northwest maintenance performed a borescope inspection of the engine at Salt Lake City, and subsequently removed and replaced the fuel pump and hydro-mechanical unit. The aircraft was returned to service. This is a final report.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON APRIL 19, 1996, AIRCRAFT N3244NW, NORTHWEST FLIGHT #358, FROM SAN FRANCISCO, CA ENROUTE TO MINNEAPOLIS/ST. PAUL, MN DIVERTED TO SALT LAKE CITY INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT, UT DUE TO A NO. 2 ENGINE FLAME-OUT. THE PILOT DECLARED AN EMERGENCY AND MADE AN UNEVENTFUL LANDING AT SALT LAKE CITY INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT NORTHWEST MAINTENANCE PERFORMED A BORESCOPE INSPECTION OF THE ENGINE AT SALT LAKE CITY, AND SUBSEQUENTLY REMOVED AND REPLACED THE FUEL PUMP AND HYDRO-MECHANICAL UNIT. THE AIRCRAFT WAS RETURNED TO SERVICE. THIS IS A FINAL REPORT.