What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on 04/25/96 at 1730 LCL, Spitfire aircraft, N356TE, landed at mcas el toro to participate as static display aircraft during el toro air show 04/26/96 through 04/28/96. Shortly after touchdown the landing gear collapsed, aircraft skidded to a stop without further incident. Post incident inspection revealed the landing gear select handle in the down position but not in the lock detent. Interview with pilot confirmed gear handle was not placed in lock detent and was cause of gear collapse.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON 04/25/96 AT 1730 LCL, SPITFIRE AIRCRAFT, N356TE, LANDED AT MCAS EL TORO TO PARTICIPATE AS STATIC DISPLAY AIRCRAFT DURING EL TORO AIR SHOW 04/26/96 THROUGH 04/28/96. SHORTLY AFTER TOUCHDOWN THE LANDING GEAR COLLAPSED, AIRCRAFT SKIDDED TO A STOP WITHOUT FURTHER INCIDENT. POST INCIDENT INSPECTION REVEALED THE LANDING GEAR SELECT HANDLE IN THE DOWN POSITION BUT NOT IN THE LOCK DETENT. INTERVIEW WITH PILOT CONFIRMED GEAR HANDLE WAS NOT PLACED IN LOCK DETENT AND WAS CAUSE OF GEAR COLLAPSE.