What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: aala flight 1308 had number two engine flame out six minutes after takeoff from oakland, California. Flight 1308 diverted to sfo. Aala maintenance at sfo performed the following maintenance on number two engine: 1. Borescope per MD-8 m/m 72-00-00 2. Replaced fuel pump, fuel control and all fuel filters 3. Engine trim performed overweight landing inspection per m/m 05/51/04/06. No NMAC or pilot deviation.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: AALA FLIGHT 1308 HAD NUMBER TWO ENGINE FLAME OUT SIX MINUTES AFTER TAKEOFF FROM OAKLAND, CALIFORNIA. FLIGHT 1308 DIVERTED TO SFO. AALA MAINTENANCE AT SFO PERFORMED THE FOLLOWING MAINTENANCE ON NUMBER TWO ENGINE: 1. BORESCOPE PER MD-8 M/M 72-00-00 2. REPLACED FUEL PUMP, FUEL CONTROL AND ALL FUEL FILTERS 3. ENGINE TRIM PERFORMED OVERWEIGHT LANDING INSPECTION PER M/M 05/51/04/06. NO NMAC OR PILOT DEVIATION.