What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on November 8, 1996, at approximately 1530 MST, an experimental home-built connors Mxii ultralight, N7016R, lost power and landed hard in a field near toleson, Arizona. The aircraft received minor damage, and the certificated private pilot and one passenger received no injuries. Visual meteorological conditions prevailed during the cattle tracking flight, and no flight plan was filed. The flight originated from paradise airpark, Arizona at approximately 1510 MST. Investigation disclosed a rubber fuel primer pump bulb was leaking. It was replaced with an in-line push primer, and operationally checked okay. Incident closed.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON NOVEMBER 8, 1996, AT APPROXIMATELY 1530 MST, AN EXPERIMENTAL HOME-BUILT CONNORS MXII ULTRALIGHT, N7016R, LOST POWER AND LANDED HARD IN A FIELD NEAR TOLESON, ARIZONA. THE AIRCRAFT RECEIVED MINOR DAMAGE, AND THE CERTIFICATED PRIVATE PILOT AND ONE PASSENGER RECEIVED NO INJURIES. VISUAL METEOROLOGICAL CONDITIONS PREVAILED DURING THE CATTLE TRACKING FLIGHT, AND NO FLIGHT PLAN WAS FILED. THE FLIGHT ORIGINATED FROM PARADISE AIRPARK, ARIZONA AT APPROXIMATELY 1510 MST. INVESTIGATION DISCLOSED A RUBBER FUEL PRIMER PUMP BULB WAS LEAKING. IT WAS REPLACED WITH AN IN-LINE PUSH PRIMER, AND OPERATIONALLY CHECKED OKAY. INCIDENT CLOSED.