What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: approach to 4L at lit selected, gear down, unable to get green on right gear, used emergency gear retract, didn't help, landed after cranking gear down. Aircraft damage to right gear door, right step, right aileron and tip tank. Aircraft being repaired at central flying service, inc., no work has been started. Suspect gear down lock broken, will be kept in loop when aircraft is repaired.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: APPROACH TO 4L AT LIT SELECTED, GEAR DOWN, UNABLE TO GET GREEN ON RIGHT GEAR, USED EMERGENCY GEAR RETRACT, DIDN'T HELP, LANDED AFTER CRANKING GEAR DOWN. AIRCRAFT DAMAGE TO RIGHT GEAR DOOR, RIGHT STEP, RIGHT AILERON AND TIP TANK. AIRCRAFT BEING REPAIRED AT CENTRAL FLYING SERVICE, INC., NO WORK HAS BEEN STARTED. SUSPECT GEAR DOWN LOCK BROKEN, WILL BE KEPT IN LOOP WHEN AIRCRAFT IS REPAIRED.