What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on August 22, 1997, a skydiver was seriously injured in a parachuting accident at marshall, MI. The skydiver, jeffry b. klan is an experienced jumper with over 400 jumps. He was using a micro raven 150 main chute which was packed on the same day of the incident and a viper, 120 emergency parachute S/N00528003 which was last packed on 6/24/97.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON AUGUST 22, 1997, A SKYDIVER WAS SERIOUSLY INJURED IN A PARACHUTING ACCIDENT AT MARSHALL, MI. THE SKYDIVER, JEFFRY B. KLAN IS AN EXPERIENCED JUMPER WITH OVER 400 JUMPS. HE WAS USING A MICRO RAVEN 150 MAIN CHUTE WHICH WAS PACKED ON THE SAME DAY OF THE INCIDENT AND A VIPER, 120 EMERGENCY PARACHUTE S/N00528003 WHICH WAS LAST PACKED ON 6/24/97.