What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On September 27, 1997, at approximately 11:30 am, the ft. Lauderdale flight standards district office received notification of the incident concerning aircraft N2728M, registered to Florida flight training, inc. per interview with the pilot, while practicing touch and go landing, they experienced landing gear collapsed at ft. Lauderdale executive airport. The aircraft sustained minor damages. On November 11, 1997, we received a fax copy of the necessary repairs to the left main landing gear and left wing. All repaired work were accomplished per Piper structural manual section 5 para 4.1 and 4.2 and 4.3. 13-1A, chapter 2 section, 3 para. 97, a, b, c, and g.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON SEPTEMBER 27, 1997, AT APPROXIMATELY 11:30 AM, THE FT. LAUDERDALE FLIGHT STANDARDS DISTRICT OFFICE RECEIVED NOTIFICATION OF THE INCIDENT CONCERNING AIRCRAFT N2728M, REGISTERED TO FLORIDA FLIGHT TRAINING, INC. PER INTERVIEW WITH THE PILOT, WHILE PRACTICING TOUCH AND GO LANDING, THEY EXPERIENCED LANDING GEAR COLLAPSED AT FT. LAUDERDALE EXECUTIVE AIRPORT. THE AIRCRAFT SUSTAINED MINOR DAMAGES. ON NOVEMBER 11, 1997, WE RECEIVED A FAX COPY OF THE NECESSARY REPAIRS TO THE LEFT MAIN LANDING GEAR AND LEFT WING. ALL REPAIRED WORK WERE ACCOMPLISHED PER PIPER STRUCTURAL MANUAL SECTION 5 PARA 4.1 AND 4.2 AND 4.3. 13-1A, CHAPTER 2 SECTION, 3 PARA. 97, A, B, C, AND G.