What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-5) On September 21, 1998, at approximately 18:30 MDT, Mr. Paul fifield (pilot), reported that his aircraft, an avian Skyhawk balloon, N1612W, hit the power lines on a final approach to a field location at 4 mile drive and highway 93, north of Kalispell, Montana. Mr. Fifield said he did not see the power line. There were two (2) passengers on board the aircraft but no injuries were reported.
As the FAA filed it
(-5) ON SEPTEMBER 21, 1998, AT APPROXIMATELY 18:30 MDT, MR. PAUL FIFIELD (PILOT), REPORTED THAT HIS AIRCRAFT, AN AVIAN SKYHAWK BALLOON, N1612W, HIT THE POWER LINES ON A FINAL APPROACH TO A FIELD LOCATION AT 4 MILE DRIVE AND HIGHWAY 93, NORTH OF KALISPELL, MONTANA. MR. FIFIELD SAID HE DID NOT SEE THE POWER LINE. THERE WERE TWO (2) PASSENGERS ON BOARD THE AIRCRAFT BUT NO INJURIES WERE REPORTED.