What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-5) Pilot took off from mvy, retracted the landing gear and heard a pop noise in his headset, then realized he had lost electrical power. He used the handheld to notify ATC that he had a problem and came around and did a fly-by the tower. The controller breadcast "the landing gear appears to be down." The pilot then flew around the pattern, got a green light from the tower to land. The pilot landed the aricraft and then the landing gear collapsed. Pilot evacuated the aircraft immediately.
As the FAA filed it
(-5) PILOT TOOK OFF FROM MVY, RETRACTED THE LANDING GEAR AND HEARD A POP NOISE IN HIS HEADSET, THEN REALIZED HE HAD LOST ELECTRICAL POWER. HE USED THE HANDHELD TO NOTIFY ATC THAT HE HAD A PROBLEM AND CAME AROUND AND DID A FLY-BY THE TOWER. THE CONTROLLER BREADCAST "THE LANDING GEAR APPEARS TO BE DOWN." THE PILOT THEN FLEW AROUND THE PATTERN, GOT A GREEN LIGHT FROM THE TOWER TO LAND. THE PILOT LANDED THE ARICRAFT AND THEN THE LANDING GEAR COLLAPSED. PILOT EVACUATED THE AIRCRAFT IMMEDIATELY.