What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23)10/03/2000 N700XJ departed vny ry 16 VFR with two pilots on board. During takeoff the right engine lost power. Aircraft returned to vny and landed without incident. N700XJ taxied to uqrr for repairs. A broken P3 tube was found and replaced with new. Engine runup checked normal. Aircraft departed vny without further incident. Uqrr submitted 8010-4 whichprivacy data omitted .
As the FAA filed it
(-23)10/03/2000 N700XJ DEPARTED VNY RY 16 VFR WITH TWO PILOTS ON BOARD. DURING TAKEOFF THE RIGHT ENGINE LOST POWER. AIRCRAFT RETURNED TO VNY AND LANDED WITHOUT INCIDENT. N700XJ TAXIED TO UQRR FOR REPAIRS. A BROKEN P3 TUBE WAS FOUND AND REPLACED WITH NEW. ENGINE RUNUP CHECKED NORMAL. AIRCRAFT DEPARTED VNY WITHOUT FURTHER INCIDENT. UQRR SUBMITTED 8010-4 WHICH^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ .