What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Mr. Ralph f. sorrels was giving Mr. James e. stermer a checkout flight in the Cessna 172 for classic aviation. After the aircraft was instructed to "taxi into position and hold" the pilot proceeded onto the runway and applied pressure to both brakes. The aircraft veered to the right with the propeller struck a runway edge light. Damage to the propeller was minor. Brake system was inspected and ops check was normal.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) MR. RALPH F. SORRELS WAS GIVING MR. JAMES E. STERMER A CHECKOUT FLIGHT IN THE CESSNA 172 FOR CLASSIC AVIATION. AFTER THE AIRCRAFT WAS INSTRUCTED TO "TAXI INTO POSITION AND HOLD" THE PILOT PROCEEDED ONTO THE RUNWAY AND APPLIED PRESSURE TO BOTH BRAKES. THE AIRCRAFT VEERED TO THE RIGHT WITH THE PROPELLER STRUCK A RUNWAY EDGE LIGHT. DAMAGE TO THE PROPELLER WAS MINOR. BRAKE SYSTEM WAS INSPECTED AND OPS CHECK WAS NORMAL.