What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Pilot doing touch and go's. on last landing got an unsafe gear indication and could not correct problem. Upon landing the right main gear collapsed. Subsequent inspection revealed the landing gear ram assembly, which was r&r for service, was safetied improperly and locking nut backed off allowing the ram ass'y rod to back out causing gear to not extend fully.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) PILOT DOING TOUCH AND GO'S. ON LAST LANDING GOT AN UNSAFE GEAR INDICATION AND COULD NOT CORRECT PROBLEM. UPON LANDING THE RIGHT MAIN GEAR COLLAPSED. SUBSEQUENT INSPECTION REVEALED THE LANDING GEAR RAM ASSEMBLY, WHICH WAS R&R FOR SERVICE, WAS SAFETIED IMPROPERLY AND LOCKING NUT BACKED OFF ALLOWING THE RAM ASS'Y ROD TO BACK OUT CAUSING GEAR TO NOT EXTEND FULLY.