What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Jumper martin siddell jumped from sky dive city aircraft at an altitude of 13,500 feet. He deployed his parachute at 3,000 feet under normal conditions. At approximately 200 feet above the ground Mr. Siddell was observed making a turn and his parachute going into a twist. He was observed trying to kick out of the twist horizontal to the ground and several seconds impacted the ground. Pronounced dead at the scene. Investigation reveals all equipment in good working order. Main chute packed 5/11/03, reserve chute packed 4/3/03.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) JUMPER MARTIN SIDDELL JUMPED FROM SKY DIVE CITY AIRCRAFT AT AN ALTITUDE OF 13,500 FEET. HE DEPLOYED HIS PARACHUTE AT 3,000 FEET UNDER NORMAL CONDITIONS. AT APPROXIMATELY 200 FEET ABOVE THE GROUND MR. SIDDELL WAS OBSERVED MAKING A TURN AND HIS PARACHUTE GOING INTO A TWIST. HE WAS OBSERVED TRYING TO KICK OUT OF THE TWIST HORIZONTAL TO THE GROUND AND SEVERAL SECONDS IMPACTED THE GROUND. PRONOUNCED DEAD AT THE SCENE. INVESTIGATION REVEALS ALL EQUIPMENT IN GOOD WORKING ORDER. MAIN CHUTE PACKED 5/11/03, RESERVE CHUTE PACKED 4/3/03.