What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Crew observed smoke in cockpit. Donned smoke goggles. Fire warning activated in aft lavatory. Flight attendants discharged a hand held fire extinguisher into lavatory. Emergency landing in maui (ogg). Evacuation initiated, all 8 slides activated and used. One flight attendant suffered slide abrasions. These are preliminary findings.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) CREW OBSERVED SMOKE IN COCKPIT. DONNED SMOKE GOGGLES. FIRE WARNING ACTIVATED IN AFT LAVATORY. FLIGHT ATTENDANTS DISCHARGED A HAND HELD FIRE EXTINGUISHER INTO LAVATORY. EMERGENCY LANDING IN MAUI (OGG). EVACUATION INITIATED, ALL 8 SLIDES ACTIVATED AND USED. ONE FLIGHT ATTENDANT SUFFERED SLIDE ABRASIONS. THESE ARE PRELIMINARY FINDINGS.