What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On 16 October, 2003 at approximately 8:06 pm, Mr. Roy m. crain, holder of pilot certificate no. 2187142 was flying a commander 690-B, N9LV a the orlando Country airport (X04), Plymouth, Florida. The purpose of the flight was to give a duel flight check-out to Mr. Ronald n. henderson, holder of pilot certificate no. 2226580. The pilots were operating in orlando Country's traffic pattern. On the last landings on runway 15 at the orlando Country airport, the right landing gear collapsed due to material failure. The aircraft sustained minor damage with no injury to the pilots. Visual meteorological conditions prevailed at the time of the incident.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON 16 OCTOBER, 2003 AT APPROXIMATELY 8:06 PM, MR. ROY M. CRAIN, HOLDER OF PILOT CERTIFICATE NO. 2187142 WAS FLYING A COMMANDER 690-B, N9LV A THE ORLANDO COUNTRY AIRPORT (X04), PLYMOUTH, FLORIDA. THE PURPOSE OF THE FLIGHT WAS TO GIVE A DUEL FLIGHT CHECK-OUT TO MR. RONALD N. HENDERSON, HOLDER OF PILOT CERTIFICATE NO. 2226580. THE PILOTS WERE OPERATING IN ORLANDO COUNTRY'S TRAFFIC PATTERN. ON THE LAST LANDINGS ON RUNWAY 15 AT THE ORLANDO COUNTRY AIRPORT, THE RIGHT LANDING GEAR COLLAPSED DUE TO MATERIAL FAILURE. THE AIRCRAFT SUSTAINED MINOR DAMAGE WITH NO INJURY TO THE PILOTS. VISUAL METEOROLOGICAL CONDITIONS PREVAILED AT THE TIME OF THE INCIDENT.