What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On December 11, 2003, comair flt. 5357, N735CA, departed Rochester airport, Rochester, NY. The flight attendant reported a "haze" in the cabin from the rear bulkhead to row 11. A smoke toilet message light came on during the climb out at approximately 8000 feet. Crew complied with the qrh, and the message light cleared. The flight returned to Rochester airport. Contract maintenance found right air conditioning pack defective and deferred per MEL 21-51-01-A, cat c. aircraft was ferried per comair maintenance control. This incident is considered closed.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON DECEMBER 11, 2003, COMAIR FLT. 5357, N735CA, DEPARTED ROCHESTER AIRPORT, ROCHESTER, NY. THE FLIGHT ATTENDANT REPORTED A "HAZE" IN THE CABIN FROM THE REAR BULKHEAD TO ROW 11. A SMOKE TOILET MESSAGE LIGHT CAME ON DURING THE CLIMB OUT AT APPROXIMATELY 8000 FEET. CREW COMPLIED WITH THE QRH, AND THE MESSAGE LIGHT CLEARED. THE FLIGHT RETURNED TO ROCHESTER AIRPORT. CONTRACT MAINTENANCE FOUND RIGHT AIR CONDITIONING PACK DEFECTIVE AND DEFERRED PER MEL 21-51-01-A, CAT C. AIRCRAFT WAS FERRIED PER COMAIR MAINTENANCE CONTROL. THIS INCIDENT IS CONSIDERED CLOSED.