What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) While skydiving in formation, a parachutist collided with a second parachutist, striking him in the chest with his head, temporarily disorienting himself. The parachutist released his main chute and deployed his emergency chute too close to the ground. The emergency chute did not have enough altitude to open and allow for a safe landing, fatally injuring the parachutist. 1. privacy data omitted 2. 1700 Jumps 3. Skydive temple 4. Tempo 210, packed on 03/05/07 by privacy data omitted. Senior rigger #462272920, seal symbol pan.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) WHILE SKYDIVING IN FORMATION, A PARACHUTIST COLLIDED WITH A SECOND PARACHUTIST, STRIKING HIM IN THE CHEST WITH HIS HEAD, TEMPORARILY DISORIENTING HIMSELF. THE PARACHUTIST RELEASED HIS MAIN CHUTE AND DEPLOYED HIS EMERGENCY CHUTE TOO CLOSE TO THE GROUND. THE EMERGENCY CHUTE DID NOT HAVE ENOUGH ALTITUDE TO OPEN AND ALLOW FOR A SAFE LANDING, FATALLY INJURING THE PARACHUTIST. 1. ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED 2. 1700 JUMPS 3. SKYDIVE TEMPLE 4. TEMPO 210, PACKED ON 03/05/07 BY ^PRIVACY DAT^. SENIOR RIGGER #462272920, SEAL SYMBOL PAN.