What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) The pilot CFI privacy data omitted was conducting a flight review for private pilot privacy data omitted. On preceding landing the airplane almost groundlooped, the tail came around from the left side with the plane stopping on the right shoulder of the runway. On the following landing, the plane groundlooped with the tail coming around from the right, and the plane stopping well off the runway to the left.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) THE PILOT CFI ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ WAS CONDUCTING A FLIGHT REVIEW FOR PRIVATE PILOT ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^. ON PRECEDING LANDING THE AIRPLANE ALMOST GROUNDLOOPED, THE TAIL CAME AROUND FROM THE LEFT SIDE WITH THE PLANE STOPPING ON THE RIGHT SHOULDER OF THE RUNWAY. ON THE FOLLOWING LANDING, THE PLANE GROUNDLOOPED WITH THE TAIL COMING AROUND FROM THE RIGHT, AND THE PLANE STOPPING WELL OFF THE RUNWAY TO THE LEFT.