What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On 3/3/08 while on approach to Pittsburgh International, the number 1 engine oil pressure warning system showed low oil pressure. A precautionary engine shutdown was performed, and the aircraft landed and taxied to the ramp without further incident. Local maintenance and masa personnel trouble shot the discrepancy, replaced oil pump, flushed and cleaned engine oil system. The aircraft was returned to service by masa maintenance personnel. Aircraft log pages 279066/279067. The masa pmi was given the aircraft logbook pages for follow-up.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON 3/3/08 WHILE ON APPROACH TO PITTSBURGH INTERNATIONAL, THE NUMBER 1 ENGINE OIL PRESSURE WARNING SYSTEM SHOWED LOW OIL PRESSURE. A PRECAUTIONARY ENGINE SHUTDOWN WAS PERFORMED, AND THE AIRCRAFT LANDED AND TAXIED TO THE RAMP WITHOUT FURTHER INCIDENT. LOCAL MAINTENANCE AND MASA PERSONNEL TROUBLE SHOT THE DISCREPANCY, REPLACED OIL PUMP, FLUSHED AND CLEANED ENGINE OIL SYSTEM. THE AIRCRAFT WAS RETURNED TO SERVICE BY MASA MAINTENANCE PERSONNEL. AIRCRAFT LOG PAGES 279066/279067. THE MASA PMI WAS GIVEN THE AIRCRAFT LOGBOOK PAGES FOR FOLLOW-UP.