What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On approach to eyw, the PIC started through the landing checklist, the PIC lowered the landing gear and he did not achieve "right main gear lock." The PIC cycled the landing gear and still no green light achieved, instrument indicated a red warning light and sounded a warning horn. The PIC contacted ATC to declare an emergency landing. The PIC entered into a hold pattern to exhaust fuel, and initiate maneuvers to lock the landing gear in the down position. The PIC made an emergency landing and the right main landing gear collapsed.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON APPROACH TO EYW, THE PIC STARTED THROUGH THE LANDING CHECKLIST, THE PIC LOWERED THE LANDING GEAR AND HE DID NOT ACHIEVE "RIGHT MAIN GEAR LOCK." THE PIC CYCLED THE LANDING GEAR AND STILL NO GREEN LIGHT ACHIEVED, INSTRUMENT INDICATED A RED WARNING LIGHT AND SOUNDED A WARNING HORN. THE PIC CONTACTED ATC TO DECLARE AN EMERGENCY LANDING. THE PIC ENTERED INTO A HOLD PATTERN TO EXHAUST FUEL, AND INITIATE MANEUVERS TO LOCK THE LANDING GEAR IN THE DOWN POSITION. THE PIC MADE AN EMERGENCY LANDING AND THE RIGHT MAIN LANDING GEAR COLLAPSED.