What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
During ups flight #34 from sdf-hnl, at a cruising altitude of FL 340, the #2 engine oil pressure dropped, followed momentarily by engine failure. The engine was shut down and appropriate checklists completed. The aircraft was past both equal time points so the flight continued to hnl where an uneventful landing was made on runway 8L. Subsequent inspection of the oil filter and chip detectors revealed an amount of metal sufficient to require engine replacement.
As the FAA filed it
DURING UPS FLIGHT #34 FROM SDF-HNL, AT A CRUISING ALTITUDE OF FL 340, THE #2 ENGINE OIL PRESSURE DROPPED, FOLLOWED MOMENTARILY BY ENGINE FAILURE. THE ENGINE WAS SHUT DOWN AND APPROPRIATE CHECKLISTS COMPLETED. THE AIRCRAFT WAS PAST BOTH EQUAL TIME POINTS SO THE FLIGHT CONTINUED TO HNL WHERE AN UNEVENTFUL LANDING WAS MADE ON RUNWAY 8L. SUBSEQUENT INSPECTION OF THE OIL FILTER AND CHIP DETECTORS REVEALED AN AMOUNT OF METAL SUFFICIENT TO REQUIRE ENGINE REPLACEMENT.