What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
While en route from el monte, CA (EMT) to woodland, CA (O41), the aircraft lost electrical power and diverted to Bakersfield municipal (L45). The PIC lowered the gear using the normal gear lever. The PIC ensured the gear was positively locked down by the resistance of the emergency handcrank being extremely hard. Upon landing, the nose gear collapsed damaging the nose gear area sheet metal, nose doors, nose strut and the propeller. A mechanic troubleshot the electrical system and found an inoperable alternator. Mechanic replaced alternator and electrical problem was corrected.
As the FAA filed it
WHILE EN ROUTE FROM EL MONTE, CA (EMT) TO WOODLAND, CA (O41), THE AIRCRAFT LOST ELECTRICAL POWER AND DIVERTED TO BAKERSFIELD MUNICIPAL (L45). THE PIC LOWERED THE GEAR USING THE NORMAL GEAR LEVER. THE PIC ENSURED THE GEAR WAS POSITIVELY LOCKED DOWN BY THE RESISTANCE OF THE EMERGENCY HANDCRANK BEING EXTREMELY HARD. UPON LANDING, THE NOSE GEAR COLLAPSED DAMAGING THE NOSE GEAR AREA SHEET METAL, NOSE DOORS, NOSE STRUT AND THE PROPELLER. A MECHANIC TROUBLESHOT THE ELECTRICAL SYSTEM AND FOUND AN INOPERABLE ALTERNATOR. MECHANIC REPLACED ALTERNATOR AND ELECTRICAL PROBLEM WAS CORRECTED.