What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Approximately 1900 hours on July 4th, 2017 during a skydiving/parachute event, privacy data omitted toggle/ steering handle came loose approximately 20 ft AGL. The parachute collapsed on the right side causing the skydiver to have a semi-uncontrolled landing, impacting the ground at a high rate of speed. The skydiver received several broken bones (leg & ribs) along with head trauma and is in critical condition at this time.
As the FAA filed it
APPROXIMATELY 1900 HOURS ON JULY 4TH, 2017 DURING A SKYDIVING/PARACHUTE EVENT, ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ TOGGLE/ STEERING HANDLE CAME LOOSE APPROXIMATELY 20 FT AGL. THE PARACHUTE COLLAPSED ON THE RIGHT SIDE CAUSING THE SKYDIVER TO HAVE A SEMI-UNCONTROLLED LANDING, IMPACTING THE GROUND AT A HIGH RATE OF SPEED. THE SKYDIVER RECEIVED SEVERAL BROKEN BONES (LEG & RIBS) ALONG WITH HEAD TRAUMA AND IS IN CRITICAL CONDITION AT THIS TIME.