What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on October 5, 1995, N71828, a DC-9-82 operated by Continental airlines, inc., as flt 723, was enroute from cleveland, oh to las vegas, NV when the crew shut down the #2(right) engine due to high vibration and high epr. The investigation disclosed the compressor 8th stage support shelf failed. This incident is closed with this report.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON OCTOBER 5, 1995, N71828, A DC-9-82 OPERATED BY CONTINENTAL AIRLINES, INC., AS FLT 723, WAS ENROUTE FROM CLEVELAND, OH TO LAS VEGAS, NV WHEN THE CREW SHUT DOWN THE #2(RIGHT) ENGINE DUE TO HIGH VIBRATION AND HIGH EPR. THE INVESTIGATION DISCLOSED THE COMPRESSOR 8TH STAGE SUPPORT SHELF FAILED. THIS INCIDENT IS CLOSED WITH THIS REPORT.