What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) About half way down the ILS 13 approach at Baton Rouge the aircraft struck a 65 foot guy-line. The pilot stated that all of his instruments appeared to be normal until he contacted the guy-line. On impact the pilot made an immediate hard pull-up to the left. The right main landing gear was damaged when he contacted the wire. On the second ILS approach the pilot made a normal approach and a normal landing. privacy data omitted
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ABOUT HALF WAY DOWN THE ILS 13 APPROACH AT BATON ROUGE THE AIRCRAFT STRUCK A 65 FOOT GUY-LINE. THE PILOT STATED THAT ALL OF HIS INSTRUMENTS APPEARED TO BE NORMAL UNTIL HE CONTACTED THE GUY-LINE. ON IMPACT THE PILOT MADE AN IMMEDIATE HARD PULL-UP TO THE LEFT. THE RIGHT MAIN LANDING GEAR WAS DAMAGED WHEN HE CONTACTED THE WIRE. ON THE SECOND ILS APPROACH THE PILOT MADE A NORMAL APPROACH AND A NORMAL LANDING. ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^