What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Aircraft on final approach for landing. Pilots reported bird strike to ATC; pilots wrote up the following discrepancy in the aircraft logbook: bird strike on approach at about 300 feet on left wing leading edge. Damage found on LH leading edge on second slat in middle section.
Maintenance corrective action: removed and replaced LH #2 slat iaw amm 27-81-21. Ops check good. Included the off and on part numbers and serial numbers in logbook and on non-routine work card.
Provided operator with wildlife strike reporting advisory circular and encouraged that they file a report.
As the FAA filed it
AIRCRAFT ON FINAL APPROACH FOR LANDING. PILOTS REPORTED BIRD STRIKE TO ATC; PILOTS WROTE UP THE FOLLOWING DISCREPANCY IN THE AIRCRAFT LOGBOOK: BIRD STRIKE ON APPROACH AT ABOUT 300 FEET ON LEFT WING LEADING EDGE. DAMAGE FOUND ON LH LEADING EDGE ON SECOND SLAT IN MIDDLE SECTION.
MAINTENANCE CORRECTIVE ACTION: REMOVED AND REPLACED LH #2 SLAT IAW AMM 27-81-21. OPS CHECK GOOD. INCLUDED THE OFF AND ON PART NUMBERS AND SERIAL NUMBERS IN LOGBOOK AND ON NON-ROUTINE WORK CARD.
PROVIDED OPERATOR WITH WILDLIFE STRIKE REPORTING ADVISORY CIRCULAR AND ENCOURAGED THAT THEY FILE A REPORT.